splickedylit:

me reading my fic before I’ve shown anybody: haha wow this is pretty good, I should show somebody

me rereading my fic after I’ve shown somebody: I hear in my incomparable folly the laughter of some cruel deity and I long for the final sweet embrace of death this line is so OOC and my plot is about as solid as a house constructed out of lentil sludge and pretzels sticks oh foul cruelty of fate